Was this a school project? Just work on timing and delivery, but I feel smarter after listening to this haha. Nice shoutout at the end, way to give props to the producer.
Was this a school project? Just work on timing and delivery, but I feel smarter after listening to this haha. Nice shoutout at the end, way to give props to the producer.
No. It wasn't a school project. This just happens to be something I like to rap about. I'm still working on my timing and delivery. I consider myself a pretty good MC.
Pretty gross. Lacked comedy as a supposed attempt at a joke. Also a waste of a decent beat.
The star is for the production, the flow was par.
Unfortunately, even tho this may be a "joke song", pedophilia has negatively affected countless lives of innocent victims. I hope songs like this don't become some not-funny trend.
Sorry I'm rusty, Its been a pedo-while.
Excellent revision. nice lon-lon ranch theme.
Lon-Lon Ranch theme? really?
Big fan of freddy, but you just overshadowed the beat totally with these next-level, clean and classic vocals.
thanks gunner!
still browsin for tracks like this, thanks for it!
ahhh thanks fam, always nice to get kudos from a producer I like!
oh this is gold. you hit it with this one!
Thanks man, we been working really hard lately. I appreciate the feedback and the follow.
excellent. glad to see there is some REAL reggaeton on newgrounds!
Thanks bro.
So glad you uploaded this instrumental. One of my favorites from the mixtape!
thanks man! MUCH love! 8>
You got a good "radio" voice, pretty easy listening. but in my opinion , upload more music, sing some more
i might do 1 and see how it turns out. if it ends up being a bust, imma drop it like it's hot~
hot hot remix. i cant believe the original came out almost 10 years ago.
It would be great if you could get the verse Eminem did as a feature on this original. But as it is right now, this mix is 10x better than the original.
Thanks!
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