Good flow good beat
kind of a depressing style, works well with the slow beat and the descending piano. you should add some singing vocals to this one, i feel like there its room for that with such a light piano melody.
Good flow good beat
kind of a depressing style, works well with the slow beat and the descending piano. you should add some singing vocals to this one, i feel like there its room for that with such a light piano melody.
bit work extraordinary
arcade dub wowow good!
im glad you post on newgrounds. you have great production skills!
Thanks so much!
swang
all of the incredible
( it clips a little between 250 - 310, though)
not bad lyrically
but you only get 1/2 credit cause you dont give shout out to EPMD for using the 'symphony' beat.
eeh
sounds kinda cheezy and midi. I mean, with GREAT vocals (and I stress, no less than great), it could be a superb track. Just sounds a little like a poor man's 'dragnet' beat.
i appreciate the review. i think the main problem is my lack of mastering abilities, or proper equipment, both issues i'm working on resolving. that, and i'm pretty new to the whole hip hop thing. but i can totally see what you mean. thanks for the honest feedback.
shaggy is always keepin it real
no doubt, you are a future NG legend haha
definitely for GRADE A+ rap. I was literally waving my hands in the air listening to this track.
inspirational style
back at it again man. this track reminds me of the days when I would listen to rza's"formula for a cure" on repeat before work and then come home and then come home, turn on the two decks, get blunted and scratch til my arm was sore
did you not already upload this, dark lord sith
darth vader hoo ride uzi driveby all black everything
Yeah I did but that version was all wrong for some reason. thanks for the second review ;)
fuck facebook
take a look around you... newgrounds is where its at. STAY UP HERE, mr jones. This is a real good highquality rap.
ill still be here...im just trying to get as much support behind me when i get this mixtape out :]
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