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[[microphone]]

definitely one of NGs top 10 MCs

man i definitely like the wordplay, the writing is lucid and very visual when I am reading along. and when Im not reading along with the lyrics, your clear pronunciation of the words verbally allow me to completely understand what you are saying... unlike many other aspiring mcs.

just get to fusing those two elements together --- the lucidity and visual imagery with the clarity of your voice. One thing I noticed is that you tend to stress everything that you say, and rightly so because each so is your masterpiece... however, if you get more highs and lows throughout the song, you can verbally highlight the main points of the track.

for example..
"Yea i show em how i live on the microphone"
(keep the line as is)
"Dont you know im explosive on microphones"
(highlight your explosiveness, like "im EXPLOSIVE on microphones)
"Borderline psychotic on microphones"
(tweak this line out a little, hint at the psychosis, throw in a schizophrenic laugh or something)

I don't mean change it drastically, just slight vocal accents on the already well written piece. Believe me, if you song like your feeling the words the youve written each time you perform or record a track, I guarantee more and more people will be feeling it too.

"to various cerebellums
i spare them then i tell em
if they mess up i will grill em
Roadkill them"

to me, this line was the best line in the song.

THEICONICICON responds:

wow i appreciate the review man...i've been working on putting some feeling into my songs...its just something i gotta work on as im working...but appreciate it and im glad you liked it...

[On My Bob Ish]

ill flow

the portal needs more reggae beats, big ups man

[[E7] Walk on Clouds (prod. SH)]

awesome feel good track

the whole family can dance to this one haha, i placed this in a mix between the grateful dead and krs-one

GloineFiodh responds:

lmao
im a big dead fan, so i'll take that.
krs is ill to, and yeah i was aiming for a feel good track.

[[E7] Time (prod. TeddyGram)]

ive been checkin your page everyday for new tracks

in these days of stagnation, your songs expand my mind faster than i can perceive like a time-lapse video of a growing tree but you retain the heavy deep flow like a whale on its dive to the depths.

you execute a great track, you really know how to make a song worth listening to on repeat.

GloineFiodh responds:

this is the best review ever.
thanks gunner.
stay producing

[JazzØ: SCKR (Low) RD2010]

i left a review in the version

serious, this track makes me feel like a robot hates me and is ready to punch me in the face and im dodging his every attempt to decapitate me.

you two did an excellent job.

11/10(seriously)
5/5

mr-jazzman responds:

Hey man, glad you liked it! =) I'm gonna see if there's some stuff with the mastering that I can fix before Robot Day; there's certain parts that I'd like to stick out a little more. So keep your ears peeled, because there may be a new version released soon! Thanks for the review man, and the praise. It means a lot! =D

[JazzO:SCK-Robot RD2010]

this is sick tight

dude I got the illest imagery in my mind of a robot vs. man 1 on 1 battle in a high-rise office building with mass chaos and destruction.

very awesome dubstep track. you kept really robotic every second of the track. +1 for the sick collab, id rate this 11 if i could.

Zizmo responds:

<3 :3

[Spacial Mindage--_--Dubstep]

sick sick dubstep

props to a great reason 3 piece. a true dubstep symphony

[SH - Wisdom Teeth]

hot damn

remind to buy your album. this shit is better than watching tv.

shaggyhaired responds:

Haha thanks man.

[NGVA - The Lester Show]

the fuckin balls

dude that beginning part was so filthy, awesome intro. and a SUPER-DOPE ALLSTAR ACAPELLA! i couldnt help but listen to it a second time.

[Cthulhu the Cynic Vs. Iconic]

A+ lyricism

absolute dope. when you battle MCs, you systematically destroy all their whole structure like your words are concentrated explosives in the lines of quick delivery.

these other MCs are in denial, but you are literally taking over NG hiphop.

GloineFiodh responds:

thanks a lot gunner. means a lot